I think that looks ok. I thought that alternate drawing was already in the vault. If not, here it is again:
http://www.neighborhost.com/images/J...wiring_alt.png
Sure. Just replace the cap with a wire. Then move the cap to that blue line that you have going from the left lug of each tone pot to ground. It doesn't matter whether the cap or pot comes first, as long as the tone control is a pot and cap to ground.
I use the sleeve lug of the output jack, but I think that might be more difficult on an LP. Its not really critical inside a guitar. Just find whatever works for your soldering skills.
By the way - Its Jimi Hendrix . . . Jimmy Page.
