MY band has recodered a demo

[metalmachine]

So my band finally has a demo. i recorded it myself. this is my first time ever recording a full band by myself. i know its not perfect and i am not a great vocalist but i am still proud of it.

http://www.soundclick.com/sledgehammerpersuasion

feedback is welcomed

just so you guys know i am the vocalist and lead guitarist (by force not choice)

guitar stuff used is

rythyms

jackson solist sl-1 c/dd 2xceramic titan custom amp. avatar 412 legend v12s
ibanez arz400 dimarzio super 3 peavy 3120 peavy ultra 412 sheffields
2 sm57s

leads

carvin dc127 koa neck and body. manluis custom hot humbucker set. titan custom amp marshall gv2 used as a boost. avatar 412 legend v12s
2 sm57s

[metalmachine]

Re: MY band has recodered a demo

Any constructive criticism?

[alteredbeast]

Re: MY band has recodered a demo

the vocals remind me of Merauder (which a good thing IMO), At some points, the rhythm guitars seem off beat slightly but enough to notice (Bad Thing). That said, for a first effort i think it sounds decent. Was a click trak used? Is it one dude doing both rhythm guitars? Or two different people?

[metalmachine]

Re: MY band has recodered a demo

Thanks. We used a click and its 2 differ'ent guys

[TheLivingDead]

Re: MY band has recodered a demo

I can dig it!

The solos could tighten up a little bit but everything else is supa tight.

[DankStar]

Re: MY band has recodered a demo

A little rough around the edges, but sounds real. Dig the rawness. Vocals remind me of something - in flames lunar strain era?

[metalmachine]

Re: MY band has recodered a demo

A little rough around the edges, but sounds real. Dig the rawness. Vocals remind me of something - in flames lunar strain era?

We were going for a raw sound and detest the use of sample replacement and cut and paste. So I am glad you said that. Thanks for the comments guys

[everdrone]

Re: MY band has recodered a demo

cool, it sounds like early slayer, with the death singer on vox

cool avatar btw