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Originally posted by Douglas AdamsThis planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movements of small green pieces of paper, which is odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.Tags: None
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Well, that was really enjoyable! Nice tones and a really nice progression; has a nice Mixolydian I-V vibe going on.
Is this the finished product or will you be developing it further?Why don't you take your little Cobra Kais and get outta here?!
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Originally posted by TwilightOdyssey View PostWell, that was really enjoyable! Nice tones and a really nice progression; has a nice Mixolydian I-V vibe going on.
Is this the finished product or will you be developing it further?
I had written parts for it and was trying to work out how everything was going to sound together. Listening back at it the bass is a little off the beat on a couple spots (and kinda clashes with the guitar at one part in the middle), it was my first time using hydrogen to do drum tracks so they sound a little uneven (also they seem to be mixed in a bit too high), and I cocked up both solos a few times . . . if it doesn't get redone at some point it'll eat away at me. :P
Interesting you say that it sounded Mixolydian . . . I was writing it thinking about A minor (and if you listen carefully the chorus, the verse, and the bridge progressions all end on an A minor chord), and was grabbing chords from the Am aeolian mode but it didn't sound strongly minor when it came together.
It was also the first time I tried recording to really capture the sound of my amp/effects in my room. Usually I do just a close mic'd clean or dirty track and then add effects/delay/verb after the fact. Which lead to some weird discoveries to me. Apparently I like the recorded sound of my gain pedals through the clean channel much better than the dirty channel of the amp (or the dirty channel with the same pedals on) . . . but I like the dirty channel more for the quieter/mostly clean parts. It's also a much bigger pain in the ass to record this way, because if you decide later that you don't want as much delay in a section, or want more phaser in another section. . . you're stuck with it. :PLast edited by GuitarStv; 04-29-2019, 07:35 AM.Join me in the fight against muscular atrophy!
Originally posted by Douglas AdamsThis planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movements of small green pieces of paper, which is odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
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Drum writing tip request . . . after recording everything I kinda feel like I should be more closely matching what the bass does with the drums. That and I shouldn't completely drop out the drums during the quiet parts, but rather reduce volume/velocity of the hits and simplify the patterns. Does that sound like a better approach to take? How do you guys write your drums?Join me in the fight against muscular atrophy!
Originally posted by Douglas AdamsThis planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movements of small green pieces of paper, which is odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
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In the intro and quiet parts, I like how the bass plays a busy line. It intertwines nicely with the guitar part.
Just a suggestion, but I’d like the bass to be less twangy and trebly and more round and deep sounding....that’s just me though, if you like it as is then go for it.
I also liked how the drums entered the first time sort of abruptly. I wasn’t expecting it so it caught my ear.
Maybe don’t do that every time as it can lose what made it special. But by all means, each time the quiet parts come up, try to do something different with the drums. Try an all Tom-Tom beat in a more laid back fashion. Etc.
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Originally posted by Gtrjunior View PostIn the intro and quiet parts, I like how the bass plays a busy line. It intertwines nicely with the guitar part.
Just a suggestion, but I’d like the bass to be less twangy and trebly and more round and deep sounding....that’s just me though, if you like it as is then go for it.
I also liked how the drums entered the first time sort of abruptly. I wasn’t expecting it so it caught my ear.
Maybe don’t do that every time as it can lose what made it special. But by all means, each time the quiet parts come up, try to do something different with the drums. Try an all Tom-Tom beat in a more laid back fashion. Etc.
Yeah, the bass is too bright. It's an all maple J-bass with a maple neck, and has that tendency. I should have rolled the bridge back a lot more than I did. :PJoin me in the fight against muscular atrophy!
Originally posted by Douglas AdamsThis planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movements of small green pieces of paper, which is odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
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I just realized that I've my bass amp has some sort of DI built in that I've never tried. Should probably give that a whirl next time.Join me in the fight against muscular atrophy!
Originally posted by Douglas AdamsThis planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movements of small green pieces of paper, which is odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
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Originally posted by GuitarStv View PostDrum writing tip request . . . after recording everything I kinda feel like I should be more closely matching what the bass does with the drums. That and I shouldn't completely drop out the drums during the quiet parts, but rather reduce volume/velocity of the hits and simplify the patterns. Does that sound like a better approach to take? How do you guys write your drums?Why don't you take your little Cobra Kais and get outta here?!
My collaborative PROGRESSIVE ROCK PROJECT, As Follows.
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Originally posted by GuitarStv View PostIt's also a much bigger pain in the ass to record this way, because if you decide later that you don't want as much delay in a section, or want more phaser in another section. . . you're stuck with it. :P
The end result is of course a bone-dry guitar track that you can fiddle with (delay, phase, EQ, Eventide, etc ad infinitum) until it's perfect.
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Originally posted by LLL View PostRecord dry rig, but put all your guitar FX (via plugins) in the DAW... and set track to monitor (so you can hear your dry guitar *with* all the FX "candy" while playing+recording).
The end result is of course a bone-dry guitar track that you can fiddle with (delay, phase, EQ, Eventide, etc ad infinitum) until it's perfect.
This sounds like a good approach, but I really like the sound of my pedals (which is why I own them). I guess you could re-amp the recorded track afterwards to tweak the pedals/amp settings?Join me in the fight against muscular atrophy!
Originally posted by Douglas AdamsThis planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movements of small green pieces of paper, which is odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
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Originally posted by GuitarStv View PostThis sounds like a good approach, but I really like the sound of my pedals (which is why I own them). I guess you could re-amp the recorded track afterwards to tweak the pedals/amp settings?
I sat in on a master class with Jack Jospeh Puig last year and he said, "Never use 'Save As' ". That really stuck with me and I've been doing it that way ever since.Last edited by TwilightOdyssey; 05-01-2019, 02:43 PM.Why don't you take your little Cobra Kais and get outta here?!
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Originally posted by Gtrjunior View PostDid you ever do anything with that chord progression you had come up with that we were talking about roughly a month ago or so?
I thought that was a really cool progression.
Yes, I've written two solos (one very pentatonic based with some outside note targeting, one very outside sounding) for it and am in the process of fleshing out the whole song now. I'm trying to work in a separate rhythm bit that may or may not fit in the end and will need a couple weeks to finish with the drums and bass parts and record it. I need to get this song finished in a way that I'm happy with first too.
Re-recorded the bass tonight for this song using my bass amp's DI, and less bridge pickup and it's sounding better already. Hopefully I'll get a chance to re-do all the guitar tracks this weekend after playing with mic placement some more.Last edited by GuitarStv; 05-03-2019, 08:45 PM.Join me in the fight against muscular atrophy!
Originally posted by Douglas AdamsThis planet has - or rather had - a problem, which was this: most of the people living on it were unhappy for pretty much of the time. Many solutions were suggested for this problem, but most of these were largely concerned with the movements of small green pieces of paper, which is odd because on the whole it wasn't the small green pieces of paper that were unhappy.
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Originally posted by GuitarStv View PostMissed this comment, sorry!
Yes, I've written two solos (one very pentatonic based with some outside note targeting, one very outside sounding) for it and am in the process of fleshing out the whole song now. I'm trying to work in a separate rhythm bit that may or may not fit in the end and will need a couple weeks to finish with the drums and bass parts and record it. I need to get this song finished in a way that I'm happy with first too.
Re-recorded the bass tonight for this song using my bass amp's DI, and less bridge pickup and it's sounding better already. Hopefully I'll get a chance to re-do all the guitar tracks this weekend after playing with mic placement some more.
As far as the bass for the song you’re currently working on...what seems to work pretty well for me is to record the part(s) then copy and paste a second track and split them hard right/left in your DAW. Kind of like what you would do to thicken up a guitar track. It really seems to make the bass sound thick.
I’m not a big Smashing Pumpkins fan but I was always amazed at how huge the bass sounded. That was my attempt to make my own bass parts sound bigger.
And of course eq to taste to make it pop.
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