A song i made for my girl....

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Hi guys... i'm madly in love with a beauty named Rebecca, so i decided to make a song for her! She has long, red hair, and clear green\blue eyes... :32:

I wrote this song, sitting on the bed, thinking about her... let me hear what you think!

www.darkoceangame.info/x3000/Rebecca.mp3

Cheers,
-Erlend
 
Re: A song i made for my girl....

F*ck that was nice! :) She must be very beautiful to deserve a song like that.
 
Re: A song i made for my girl....

Thanks! :)

About the harmonies; i missed them completely IMO. But the feel of the track was too good to make another try ;).

Yeah, she is a very beautiful girl. She's like a sunset over the water... emerald eyes....

Gaaaah!!! I'm such a... dork in love :D
 
Re: A song i made for my girl....

Awesome Stuff Elrend ...defiately Clapton/eagles In Style...im Also A Sucker For Red Hair And Green Eyes. Hope She Likes It.

Chris
 
Re: A song i made for my girl....

Unholy Hails Erlend
Thank´s For The Good Tune And Tone
****ing Hails And Unholy Anal Feeling On This Track
Hails
J.p
 
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Everything they say about redheads is TRUE!!!;)

Groovy song man...cool harmony part:)
 
Re: A song i made for my girl....

Nice tune, Erlend

I preferred the clean part myself, I found the distorted tone sounded a little harsh. Mabe a little less treble and a bit of delay?

Playing was nice though. Was it improvised?
 
Re: A song i made for my girl....

E,

Very nice my friend. I think you wrote a very beautiful piece. It sounds (literally sounds) like she is special to you. It sounds almost a little melancholy to me though, like you're aware of these feelings but scared to present them. Maybe that vino I've been sippin' on blurred my perception, I dunno. I am however, VERY happy that you gave up smokin' nutmeg, :laugh2: :laugh2: :laugh2: :smack: and have moved on to better things. I think you have alot of talent and Rebecca's a lucky philly. I only hope she has a penchant for whale meat like you do. :laugh2: :) The way to a man's heart is thru his stomach.
Best of luck Earl!!!

Peace,

Darrin
 
Re: A song i made for my girl....

Hames Jetfield said:
Hey that was pretty cool. What is your setup?

Guitar: Ibanez RG270DX with stock pickups, one year old strings.
"Amp": Digitech RP100 Multi Effects Module.
Recording Unit: PC with $20 crap soundcard, Cool Edit Pro

The playing was improvised, and first take. For you who want to know, she really liked the song! :)

Thanks for all the kind words guys, i really appreciate it!
 
Re: A song i made for my girl....

big earl!

thats a very very lovely tune. lovely lovely lovely!!!! i'm gonna ask u for playing tips.
 
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