an old instumental i recorded on my PC

listening now. seems pretty cool. my first impression was something like ride across the river by dire straits.

now its turning it up a bit, cool tune at about 1 minute in.

nice guitar work, with both of them......

nice chops, great playing with a terrific tone to go with the song.

there was just a part were, there is another... where i think you went a little to fast for the song, weird temp change

the tapping i love! great addition. goes well with the song to bring the pace up.

the little riff thing, interesting and it could work, but needs a little help with tempo.

i just heard where some editing to place i think, starting the delay thing....that delay was a nice touch.....same with the feedback thing, great ending.

overall, i like the tune. great job! nice playing, and, imo, with those changes it could be amazing!
 
fenderiarhs said:
was it THAT bad?

No way dude! Sounded awesome, you really have some melodic control going on ;) ! I also totally digged the vibe and I really liked the tapping. I don't mind the little flaws, cuz the song makes up for that

:D
 
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