Critique this metal guitar idea

[Kelly71]

Put these tracks together, needs to be tightened up, but gonna make couple changes before recording again. Thanks for your thoughts.

Cheers

https://soundcloud.com/matty-gee-51288554/thrill-of-the-hunt

 

[Kamanda~SD]

Re: Critique this metal guitar idea

Don't know what kind of critique your looking for, but:

-Guitars need tightening up, especially noticeable when the harmony's come in
-Needs some context! No drums, bass, or vocals etc...hard to tell. I think if you tracked with even a simple drum loop in the background it would tighten things up as well.

Sounds like a decent start.

 

[El Dunco]

Re: Critique this metal guitar idea

The timing and tuning is way out but I can kind of imagine it sounding like Iron Maiden.