WTF man, what were you trying to do at 9s?

I don't know if you wanted opinions, but the initial riff is very good, as well as the one around 33s...Just IMHO, if you want to sound weird, try to write something more simple, and with the same BPM throughout and maybe in 4/4...IDK, my 2 cents. ^^ :1:
(PS: I read in an interview with the Meshuggah guitarist, that they like to write weird stuff in 4/4)