Hey guy ! Jazzy/ambient sort of piece

[ToneCapone]

Hey guys this is the first song I've put up on the web. I recorded it about 1 1/2 years ago with a MIM strat with Blue and Gold lace sensors through a GNX3. Check it out and tell me if you think I should pursue adding on to this song or not. Thanks

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/antoniooz.htm

 

[shred me good]

Re: Hey guy ! Jazzy/ambient sort of piece

i realy like it!
though i think perhaps the lead should save the speedeyer lick untill towards the midle of the piece. im just commenting as i listen! i also like some of the melodys you make over the chord changes. ok songs fineshed now!

yes you should persue this!
tip to make the song fuler would be to change the dynamics a bit, maby have the rythem strum slightly faster and increase the gain on the lead for a short while and then have just a held chord on the rhythem and change through a few modes on the lead, you know what im getting at.
but good effort, i likey a lotey

 

[nuntius]

Re: Hey guy ! Jazzy/ambient sort of piece

Very reflective listenable music

Some very nice melodies - was it improvised?

If you're gonna pursue it you could add some extra textures in the background towards the end and have it build up to a finish