i dig it, i just wish the music was more layered and the vocals were kind of distracting. i've listened to a lot of your recordings since i joined the forum and i have to ask, do you have any drummer/ bass buddies you can jam with? like dedicated writing out fleshed out songs jamming. i think all my criticisms would be remedied by how thinking in a band mindset will affect your songwriting.
for me, aside from the obvious things like increased skill level, the difference between what i composed on guitar or synths BEFORE i started playing in bands and after is huge.
you've got a unique taste and approach, and i think if you applied your style to a more solid songwriting skillset you'd be an internet celebrity in no time (much more deserving than chocolate rain guy!) just my two cents, disregard if i sound offensive or insulting