My first Clip posting!

[Skullkrusher]

This is my first clip posting. Let me know what you think.The song is nowhere near being done, but I just wanted to see what you guys thought.


http://www.garageband.com/artist/Ravenous

 

[Gunner]

I really like this brother!

Please post as and when other tracks are finalised and online for us to check out!

 

[Skullkrusher]

I really like this brother!

Please post as and when other tracks are finalised and online for us to check out!

Thanks man!!

 

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HAILS MAN
CAN YOU SEND IT TO MY EMAIL?
Check out my tunes on clips and tips
hails
rate it
J.P

 

[ranger1bn75inf]

I like it too, the keyboard parts are smoothhh. The guitar player ain't bad either!

Jon

 

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HAILS MAN
I Heard your song.
good drums equalizations. the dru,m bass could be more IN your face and more heavy. it´s like some kind of flabby.
the guitar tonesare a little Fuzzy. without substance.
Excelent stuff. excelent Keyboards.(note : i hate keyboards, but this one is well engaged in the song. perfecto PORRA. ahahaah)
this song has places to put Clean and Dirty vokills
i already figured out where to put what.
Q
if you want, i can send a soundfile to you with the vocal lines... where to put what... but you need to give me teh lirycs.
Q
Check out my F****** files at the same forum area. tips..
Q
HAILS
J.P

ah... ALSO, there´s a place for some solos too.
come to brazil, i will help you in the band.
ahahahahahahaha

 

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forgot to say.... A LOT OF SENTIMENT ON the Keyboard parts.

 

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Uhhhhhhh bad english
A Lot of Feeling
Q

 

[Skullkrusher]

WFD,
Thanks man. The song does need alot of work, but I did the best I could with what I have to work with. I don't have any lyrical ideas for the song, so your more than welcome to come up with what you can. I'd love to hear what you can come up with. The more help the better, because I'm NO singer.