Good stuff and it's quite interesting and refreshing. Keep on going man!
A little thing I noticed: I think the very clean DI guitar around 2 minutes is a very little offtune. Doesn't sound to be a tuning issue, rather some fret / octave matter. I run into it all the time when I record guitars
Hehe, good ear. I actually detuned the guitar 1/4 tone for that kinda warbly 'Library Of Congress' in-the-field sound. I realize this will not be to everyone's taste.
Best guess, either Demanic is directly suggesting that you apply some of Brian Eno's non-conventional production techniques or he is doing so obliquely. http://www.rtqe.net/ObliqueStrategies/