New Rhythm/Lead Riffage. Opinions Needed

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****ing Hails FRIENDS!
i´m on a new band now, Called Dissidium.
Death Metal .
i´m working on my first Lead work in one of the band´s song at the moment.. and i just finished what i believe will be the final version of the lead on this song.
Embodied Hell is the name of the Song.
Here´s the Except of the song where i did my lead Work.
http://www.soundclick.com/withfulldistortion

http://www.soundclick.com/util/downloadSong.cfm?ID=3976974&key=1DC16D20-C
****ign Hails, cast your opinions and don´t mind the bady record quality

Schecter Avenger - Emg 81 - 85 Neck.
C# Tune.
amp, Crate Gx 15. Amp´s Own Distortion
Bass on 5, Middles on 5,5, Highs on 6.
En ****ing Joy!
aahahahahaha!

 

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Re: New Rhythm/Lead Riffage. Opinions Needed

ARE the links working for you!?

 

[Tux789]

Re: New Rhythm/Lead Riffage. Opinions Needed

the lead tone slays but the rhythm tone is a real buzzkill

 

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Yah.. too much output.

 

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Re: New Rhythm/Lead Riffage. Opinions Needed

but i´m talking more about the notes than the EQ.
cause the EQ will ALWAYS sound crap.. until i get a new stuff to record.

 

[Pecan]

Re: New Rhythm/Lead Riffage. Opinions Needed

The tone with the rythem is... not good. Actual notes of the lead would work, but I'm guessing your having trouble recording how it really sounds.

 

[Tux789]

Re: New Rhythm/Lead Riffage. Opinions Needed

the solo sounds like it would fit in that peice rather well