New Song! Feedback Welcomed!

ericmeyer4

New member
I started working on this new song called music box.

At the moment I only have a simple chord progression down and the drums.

The chord pattern goes C6-Dm6-F6-G6. I need to add some lead lines to the top of it and some bass and maybe some lyrics.

For the guitars I am thinking clean lead lines and some the chords have just a touch of quick delay.

Any suggestion for a bass line? I had something earlier but I scrapped it because it really wasn't fitting with the song.

Here is the first version and it was waaaay too fast.
http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5799175&q=hi

And the current version. Slowed down to a more appropriate speed for what I want this song to sound like.
http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5801236&q=hi

I would love some feed back on it.

Thanks!
-Eric
 
Re: New Song! Feedback Welcomed!

I definately liked the slower one better. Keep working on it, I can see it turning out very cool.
 
Back
Top