new song: The Widow

[woemoejack]

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[innerdreamrecords.co]

Re: new song: The Widow

I listened to the first one, nice vibe. If I can give a bit of constructive criticism I felt it was too obvious in the vocal melody. I think you could surprise the listener more and still be melodically strong.

 

[woemoejack]

Re: new song: The Widow

I listened to the first one, nice vibe. If I can give a bit of constructive criticism I felt it was too obvious in the vocal melody. I think you could surprise the listener more and still be melodically strong.

thanks for listening. I can understand what you're saying about the vocal line, it could use some difference between the first and second verses at least. thanks again

 

[75lespaul]

Re: new song: The Widow

Not my cup of tea, but they are both cool tunes, and I like the harmonies and vocal stylings. I'd just say in the second one that the harmonies started off a bit wobbly and then tightened up.