New Tune (Stranger's Shove)

[cream123]

about a friend who went to college and got lost in drugs and seems to now have a sex addiction...sad ****.

Thinking about adding drums...maybe
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[75lespaul]

Re: New Tune (Stranger's Shove)

Great beginning. I can see this either continuing as a moody piece, maybe adding a guitar or strings or something little by little, or a whole band kicking in right where you ended it. I really like the vocals in the lower register.

 

[cream123]

Re: New Tune (Stranger's Shove)

Great beginning. I can see this either continuing as a moody piece, maybe adding a guitar or strings or something little by little, or a whole band kicking in right where you ended it. I really like the vocals in the lower register.

idk if I even want to lengthen it. I see what you are saying...but its part of a greater "Concept" that I'm working on for an album.

 

[Ninja Monkey]

Re: New Tune (Stranger's Shove)

dude, is that your voice?
i like.
the whole vibe would work very well in an album.
you've got me interested, man.
i felt like i was somewhere else, and i was having some sort of spiritual face-to-face.
whenever you've got the thing done, you can steal 14 bucks from me, fo shizzle. haha.

 

[kevlar3000]

Re: New Tune (Stranger's Shove)

I enjoy every tune you present. You have an amazing creative talent, very cool....