Recorded a bastard song today. NEGLECTED.

[80's_Metal]

I think the bass might be a bit hot.

Feedback welcomed.

I finally got vocals to be more clear....been working on that part.

Single guitar track, single bass line, single vocal. As simple as I could make it.

 

[Demanic]

Re: Recorded a bastard song today. NEGLECTED.

The bass sounds just fine to me. Another well written piece. Keep it up!

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[80's_Metal]

Re: Recorded a bastard song today. NEGLECTED.

The bass sounds just fine to me. Another well written piece. Keep it up!

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Thanks brother!

 

[Demanic]

Re: Recorded a bastard song today. NEGLECTED.

I've said it before, if I lived closer, I'd audition to be your bass player. Even just to sit in at the studio would be cool.
You have a good sense for composition.

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[Clint 55]

Re: Recorded a bastard song today. NEGLECTED.

Sounds really good. Your instrumentals are on point. I take back what I said about the guitar tracking. Maybe make the vocals more reckless?

 

[Demanic]

Re: Recorded a bastard song today. NEGLECTED.

Sounds really good. Your instrumentals are on point. I take back what I said about the guitar tracking. Maybe make the vocals more reckless?

More reckless? Do you mean sounding? I suppose some reverb wouldn't hurt them.
But I kinda like the dry direct sound that he gets.

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[80's_Metal]

Re: Recorded a bastard song today. NEGLECTED.

So on remixing the whole song 15 times ha ha..., I took a dry vocal track left, and then duplicated it to the right channel, where I added a touch of delay. Gave the drums more pop.... Smoothed out the bass, tried to mix it a little more evenly. With my hearing loss I always send it to my friends and have them help me find any spots that stick out too badly.

 

[Demanic]

Re: Recorded a bastard song today. NEGLECTED.

Mix it the way that it sounds good to you.
It's like Impressionism: the painters who originated it likely had vision problems. But they painted what they saw nevertheless.

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[greekdude]

Re: Recorded a bastard song today. NEGLECTED.

nice one, maybe the vocals a little in the mix?

 

[DankStar]

Re: Recorded a bastard song today. NEGLECTED.

Cool tune - I’d bring the vox down a tad but that’s a personal taste.

 

[GuitarStv]

Re: Recorded a bastard song today. NEGLECTED.

Another good track. The drums and rhythm guitar especially sound great.