so i got a soundcloud.

[Ninja Monkey]

look at that.

feel free to tell me why it sucks and/or what i can focus on for improving my work, for keeping my ego in check and my music respectively. however, you can skip critiquing the trainwreck lyrics if you wish.

 

[cream123]

Re: so i got a soundcloud.

man, I'm digging the guitar work. rhythmically it could be a little tight but the guitar lines/parts are well written. the voice is nice!

 

[TheLivingDead]

Re: so i got a soundcloud.

Hey that was pretty damn good, dude!

 

[Bass_Medic_05]

Re: so i got a soundcloud.

man, I'm digging the guitar work. rhythmically it could be a little tight but the guitar lines/parts are well written. the voice is nice!

Yes, sound good, but like he said just a little tighter, but was sweet!