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daemon barbeque

daemon barbeque

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hi guys/gals..
This song is one of my favorites that i wrote ever.This is just the concept work.Jus guitar and at the begining some bells.All made with duncan distortion and toneport.
It is very nesesarry to hear your objective critique ,since this will be a track in my comming album .i tried different tones and mixing in different parts.
I am waiting your replys..Thanx in Advance.
The song called Flagolated daemon cookies.The last uploadet one in my soundclick...
 
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Pretty cool! Nice melody in the middle of the song..the doubled-part is amazing...great, tight tone.
 
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StrangeSound said:
Pretty cool! Nice melody in the middle of the song..the doubled-part is amazing...great, tight tone.
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Thank you !!!i would like to thank you for your interest and kind words..!!!
so you think i have to take that tone with overdubb??.I find it good too.cool!!
 
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Nice tune man. Good tone too.

The only thing I can really suggest is try doing the same song but without effects and see how that sounds.
 
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BluesGuyJ said:
Nice tune man. Good tone too.

The only thing I can really suggest is try doing the same song but without effects and see how that sounds.
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yeah i made it:bigthumb: more than once.i wrote it two years ago...i try to find the right rythm tone...and i think the one in the first chorus is the right one.thanx for your interest an critique:arms:
 
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Osensei said:
Sounds like Malmsteen made a pact with Satan!
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oh no?!?! that bad???
hehehe.oh man you are great.thank you.But i am still more into def rythm and melodic soloing.I will never be so fast as a normla shredder.This is thing is not in my "blood".I will be downstroking till my dead^^:cool:and playing melodic loong solos and pinch harmonics in my grave^^
 
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You asked for a critique, so here it is:

I think the intro is forced. Kind of cool/trippy riff but very cut and dry when the distortion hits. There needs to be a smoother transition. I think a soloing guitar with distortion over the first riff would be a nice addition and make the up-coming metal riff more natural.

As for the other sections, I think the song needs a better arrangement. It kind of seems chaotic in parts with a solid rhythm but a squealing guitar randomly hitting. There are definitely some cool riffs there. I just think you need to spend a little more time planning on where you want the song to go and take it there. Currently, the song gives the improv vibe. For an album, you want it to seem very strategic and purposeful.
 
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speed2dirt said:
You asked for a critique, so here it is:

I think the intro is forced. Kind of cool/trippy riff but very cut and dry when the distortion hits. There needs to be a smoother transition. I think a soloing guitar with distortion over the first riff would be a nice addition and make the up-coming metal riff more natural.

As for the other sections, I think the song needs a better arrangement. It kind of seems chaotic in parts with a solid rhythm but a squealing guitar randomly hitting. There are definitely some cool riffs there. I just think you need to spend a little more time planning on where you want the song to go and take it there. Currently, the song gives the improv vibe. For an album, you want it to seem very strategic and purposeful.
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You are damn right!!!
all the "soloing" melodies are improv. there and you heard it well.The riffing is my stronger side.I am lanning better ,tighter notes for soloing with more feeling and better story telling vibe.For the intro ,it was my decision to shock with the distortion in intro with panning.But i have to use the tone (tube scream with diezel herbert) ,to make it tighter and aggresiver ,and it will be rainforced with backing keyboards.

I thank you for your interest and very helping critique ,since it helped me to see some "points" wich a missed.Thanx alot!!!
 
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daemon barbeque said:
I thank you for your interest and very helping critique ,since it helped me to see some "points" wich a missed.Thanx alot!!!
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No problem. I'm highly impressed with your guitar playing. I like the style and skill that you show. It's music to my ears to hear a good, talented metal player. Keep it up!
 
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speed2dirt said:
No problem. I'm highly impressed with your guitar playing. I like the style and skill that you show. It's music to my ears to hear a good, talented metal player. Keep it up!
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Thanx man i am really happy now!!!:bigthumb:cos i am actually a drummer!!!hehe.yuuuhuuuuuuu!!!:arms:
 
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