Whatcha think about this??....new song

[Jeff Seal]

I always fear posting new tunes on the internet, so I figured I would go to a trusted source.... (that would be all of you!) to get some honest opinions.
So, here goes....

http://www.animose.com/audio/quit-thinkin-onweb.mp3

rough mix at best, any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.... good or bad!

Jeff Seal

 

[kmcguitars]

Re: Whatcha think about this??....new song

Good Stuff Jeff Killer Tone and playing. It reminds me a bit like old Heart. I love the meter shift at the bridge. The only thing I would do different is...Because the verses are played with syncopated chords. I wouldn't syncopate the chords at the end of the chorus. I'm just thinking it would create a stronger hook coming back into the verse? But then.. I might be THINK'IN to much.:laugh2:At any rate it's a cool tune.:smokin: Good Luck with it.:bigok:

 

[Wattage]

Re: Whatcha think about this??....new song

Very much reminds me of cool, old Heart too.

I'd like to hear you compress the bass and get it up front a bit more. Keep the solo break syncopated and a bit funkier maybe?

 

[Vasshu the humanoid typhoon]

Re: Whatcha think about this??....new song

Yeah old Heart and Pretenders here as well!
Dunno...I just liked it

 

[kevlar3000]

Re: Whatcha think about this??....new song

I would love to hear some more color on the vocals, doubled tracks, a harmony hear and there. You go to a lot of places dynamically on the tune guitar wise, but her voice kinda sits in the same place. Love to hear her jump off the cliff with you. The drums are a bit polite sonically speaking, any more room vibe you could throw on them? They sound a bit smaller than where you are trying to push that tune to my ears.

Definately a cool track, but it feels a bit too controlled. Your guitar is breathing and jumping in real a cool way, but the band does match the intensity as much as I really want it too. Way more good stuff than bad stuff ( no bad stuff actually), I just want to be swept away by the track a bit more.

 

[ErikH]

Re: Whatcha think about this??....new song

Nice. I hear Ann Wilson style all over that. I like it. Good groove. Gotta love a good female singer.

 

[LesStrat]

Re: Whatcha think about this??....new song

:wow:

:cool2::cool3: tune, Jeff.

I can hardly wait for the final mix.

 

[Luke Duke]

Re: Whatcha think about this??....new song

Everything I would say has been said. Jeff you're playing is a lot more intense than the drums and bass, specifically the bass.....maybe they just need to sound bigger....

Luke

 

[daemon barbeque]

Re: Whatcha think about this??....new song

Jeff that thing ripps.So strong ballsy tone with such Gain is quite surprising!I loved the Alternate picking fast riffing part alot!

 

[Elrond39]

Re: Whatcha think about this??....new song

Yum. Deliciously funky and rockin'.

Mostly have to agree with earlier comments, could use a bit of livening up in the rest of the instruments, and some vocal variation. Overall, very enjoyable, though.

 

[Markk]

Re: Whatcha think about this??....new song

Yeah, the guitar is awesome. The rest of the band/instruments have to kick it up a notch