You need to reverse the input and output of the volume pots to get quasi-independent vol controls. It's not perfect, because as you lower the pot, you increase the "load" on the pup, thus altering it's character. But there's no good way to implement a passive mixer.
Actually, there is, but it requires two dual-gang 1-meg pots, which aren't easy to find. Not concentric, but ganged. One shaft, one knob, per pot. I'll try to find the diagram if you want to attempt it. The actual wiring is dirt simple.