New clip: VERY rough song riff idea (need input)

[Davey]

now, this is a very rough take, timings are off, sound isnt processed, some playing is off key (note. at the ending (starting at 2:40) is intended to be very very off key)

ok, that aside. i'm working on a song, working title is Devils fall. will be quite longer than this quick take (probably in two parts), but this is an idea i'd like to do for the climax-ish thingy. imagine the fast part panning left and right making you dizzy, with double bass at lightspeed...

ok.. what do you think? sound vise evil enough? playing is so-so i know, just quickly threw a couple of ideas together, but will apretiate yours also

input please

(ckick on the music link in my sig, it's the devils fall one)

[TwilightOdyssey]

Re: New clip: VERY rough song riff idea (need input)

It's thick, and fast. It's more thrashy than power metal.
I would say, break up the more frenetic riffs with some straight riffing for the verses, and use the crazy riffs as bridges between the verses.

Not bad, I like!!

[Davey]

Re: New clip: VERY rough song riff idea (need input)

i wasnt going for power metal.. if anything i wanted it closer to death metal and trash is pretty much in that same vein.. sog isnt going to have many verses per se.. it's going to tell a story, spoken words. maybe some singing, but that is on the backburner for now

[nuntius]

Re: New clip: VERY rough song riff idea (need input)

Nice tone man

It's pretty cool but it needs drums and other things to give it a bit more direction.

[Davey]

Re: New clip: VERY rough song riff idea (need input)

Nice tone man

thx =)

It's pretty cool but it needs drums and other things to give it a bit more direction.

it is a rough take and as you know i dont have anything yet to do the drummage... besides, get your ass on MSM

[Davey]

Re: New clip: VERY rough song riff idea (need input)

bump

anyone else.. show some love, plz, thx

[WITH FULL DISTORTION]

Re: New clip: VERY rough song riff idea (need input)

AHAHAH UNHOLY TONE. LIKED THE THRASH METAL RIFFS.
but you have to organized them... repeat some of it and fix the time off stuffs.
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I LIKED IT .