Childhood (New Tune)

[cream123]

Lemme know what you think, its a pretty chill tune that I've posted part of before, but I added a solo and reworked some of the parts.

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-Marc

[cream123]

Re: Childhood (New Tune)

updated the ending

[firebirdV]

Re: Childhood (New Tune)

I liked it, not like anything I've heard before. Take my comments as uneducated criticism.

On a first listen basis, I think that the intro is a little too slow. I also think that the song as a whole is a little too long.

Your rhythm guitar tone makes it difficult to focus on the lead. At times, it seems too loud and at other times, it just is a little too noticeable (sharp sounding). This could be the mixing, or just me, I don't really know. I also think that the rhythm needs less reverb.

Again, I would like to emphasize that overall, I think this song is very good, and definitely a lot better than anything I've written. Hope my criticism helps.