i took another crack at it today and recorded it. i took the solo backing out as i talked to Jose from Sphinx and due to missunderstandings and me unable to explain what i want to do with the riff, he said i'd be better off not using it.
so i wrote another backing section. song is a little bit longer, but it's pretty basic and straightforward. have to polish it up immensly and add more stuff and twist it, expand some sections, etc
but, this is it for today, i'll be working on it throughout the week as i'm off of work till the 3rd january, so i got some time. (ideas apretiated)
note. outro is completely screwed up as inspiration left me (and the sugar i was on during the day wore off).
it's a bit monotonous, but know that this is just one guitar, rough, without any tuchups, no details, anything.
some constructive criticism please
Rough take
mp3 - right click, save as
so i wrote another backing section. song is a little bit longer, but it's pretty basic and straightforward. have to polish it up immensly and add more stuff and twist it, expand some sections, etc
but, this is it for today, i'll be working on it throughout the week as i'm off of work till the 3rd january, so i got some time. (ideas apretiated)
note. outro is completely screwed up as inspiration left me (and the sugar i was on during the day wore off).
it's a bit monotonous, but know that this is just one guitar, rough, without any tuchups, no details, anything.
some constructive criticism please
Rough take
mp3 - right click, save as
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