How should I go forward with this arrangement?

[El Dunco]

Oh yeah, the bass is really G&L L2500 on the growly bridge pickup in series, all fingers. Hartke TA300 with a bit of the Mesa DR orange channel on crunch blended. I love that sound.

[El Dunco]

Viola, a song

https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/lwegr...qag3hvwsntqr&d l=0

[Aceman]

OK - late to the game here!

First - all of it sounded really awesome. Great sound, great riffs.

I'll listen to the final song later. But I think there are easily enough riffs in that for at least one song, and some that could be others. Just the first three or four could easily be an intro, a verse, a pre chorus and a chorus. Might need to extend/shorten/repeat a bit.

I will point out, and this is maybe just me...but I was not a fan of And Justice because they just threw riffs and changes everywhere they possibly could. Meanwhile, the black album is just awesome because bludgeon one riff into the ground - as long as a good riff.

[El Dunco]

OK - late to the game here!

First - all of it sounded really awesome. Great sound, great riffs.

I'll listen to the final song later. But I think there are easily enough riffs in that for at least one song, and some that could be others. Just the first three or four could easily be an intro, a verse, a pre chorus and a chorus. Might need to extend/shorten/repeat a bit.

I will point out, and this is maybe just me...but I was not a fan of And Justice because they just threw riffs and changes everywhere they possibly could. Meanwhile, the black album is just awesome because bludgeon one riff into the ground - as long as a good riff.

Interesting you say that because that’s essentially what I did. Much better suited to put vocals and a solo on.

[El Dunco]

Interesting you say that because that’s essentially what I did. Much better suited to put vocals and a solo on.

I’m still interested to know how you like it now that it’s structured to be a song.

[El Dunco]

Any thoughts before I add lyrics/leads?

https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/lwegr4xa55yiw3jw7bci1/Fragmenta-BrutalSong2023-instrumental.wav?rlkey=weuytg9h019zdqag3hvwsntqr&d