1968 Fender Pro Reverb + Bathroom + Emo-y Wordz =

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Very cool. The lyrics are so soulful so full of Emo...well you know!

Great feel on the guitar track. I like it the way it is, without any drums or keys. Gives it something special.

Mark
 
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More instruments in this song... no, no... you must be nuts. It sounds great just the way it is!

Great chord movement, Foamer. Do I hear a diminished chord in one of the sections there????
 
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that also sounds like a strat...

your squirell must be flattered.
 
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You should do two versions of it... one with tons of drums, french horns, bazoukis, strum sticks, jew's harps, etc... and a stripped down version. Post a poll, have everybody vote on which one they like better, then tell us all to fock off and use whichever one you prefer.
 
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IMO, this song would benefit from some percussion to propel it along a little more.
 
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That's some fine groovin' Foamy! I got my valves all oiled up and euphoniumized all over the song for a few minutes. It was fun. 'Cept I don't really like the key of E. I bet a horn would be cool on the track. PS. What's your primary instrument?
 
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Seafoamer- that's a cool tune. Nice guitar work.

the bathroom worked great.
 
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The Vault: Yup, a flat VI diminished chord is up in that ma.

dd: gtr is my principle instrument. p.s. euphoniums are cool!

sanx fo tha listenz!!!


Oh, & I went shoppin today & saw plenty of babies. Punched none. :)
 
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I pumped up the volume on the clip, if any1 gives a catz ass.
 
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Nice tune!! I like the guitar progresion... My only criticism it's that guitar tone it's too trebly for my tastes. If you add more instruments probably that won't be a problem. But if you leave the song as is I would record the guitar again looking for more body in the tone.

Just my two cents.
 
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tonight i promise to give it a listen........i finally read all the responces and am now very interested!
 
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i dig the song the way it is....turn up the vocals more though.....
not my favorite song of yours, but good guitar tone and singing, just make the vocals louder.....


also, DONT put anymore instruments on the tune. this is THE PERFECT ending song to an album.......reminds me A LOT of butterfly by weezer (last song on their pinkerton album).


but deffinately raise the vocals....
 
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also, for my personal tastes, the song is about a minute to long...
 
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very nice song. i think it could be good if it were just the vocals and an acoustic guitar
 
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i like it! nothing wrong with vocals and a clean electric... hey i do it that way.

good song

edm
 
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Finally got to listen to the whole tune. :cool3: I couldn't really turn it up enough to catch the lyrics, though (I'm at work...shhhh).

For variety, maybe try some percussion (rather than drums).

The acoustic guitar idea might work as well, especially with your arranging skills.

If not a French horn, how's 'bout a flute?
 
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