Acoustic Song

[HetfieldRules]

well a couple days ago, my friend and i recorded an acoustic song that i wrote, i play guitar and she sings. i figured, i'd post it and hopefully get ur guys opinions. thanx

it's called "Change(yaz)"

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/robcorradomusic.htm

there is also a version w/ me singing, it's jsut called "Change" so if you wanna compare you can.

 

[HetfieldRules]

Re: Acoustic Song

why does no one ever listen to my clips?!

 

[nuntius]

Re: Acoustic Song

The riff is nice, but it needs something different like a chorus

 

[HetfieldRules]

Re: Acoustic Song

yeah it's very simple, 2 chords the whole time, i think we are going to write a heavier riff for it and see where that takes us. but thanks for the responses..maybe you guys could check out some of the other stuff i posted a while ago on soundclick for my band and tell me what you think

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/crimsonskymusic.htm