"Breathe" demo - Boss GT10 direct.

[Vasshu the humanoid typhoon]

Re: "Breathe" demo - Boss GT10 direct.

Thought it would be Pink Floyd
Total spacious bliss......has a really wide open sound, loads of air....total dig it!

 

[innerdreamrecords.co]

Re: "Breathe" demo - Boss GT10 direct.

Thought it would be Pink Floyd
Total spacious bliss......has a really wide open sound, loads of air....total dig it!

Thanks Rid. I don't think I can play a Pink Floyd tune! That's you're turf anyhow. I know where my limitations are and soloing is one.

 

[sosomething]

Re: "Breathe" demo - Boss GT10 direct.

It took until the 2nd chorus to really pull me in, but it's a good song. You've really captured a vibe here - The Cure, The Church, Scissor Sisters, etc. It's good stuff.

Now for my mild criticism - all purely my subjective opinions:

During the keyboard break after the bridge, it lacks a melodic hook. You've got a very up-front and bold synth sound there, and it should be playing something that really sticks.

You should work a bit on your vocal phrasing. Your tone and pitch are happening pretty good, but your phrasing is very straight and evenly paced, and it can make some of your lyrics come off clumsily when they shouldn't. Add a few little timing embellishments to your meter and get a little more personality into your voice and you'll have it.

 

[innerdreamrecords.co]

Re: "Breathe" demo - Boss GT10 direct.

and get a little more personality into your voice and you'll have it.

Thanks for the listen and crit. I was thinking the same thing here.