Can you give me feedback( "The loner jam")

[YamiFrankc]

Hey guys! Im new here . Sometimes i read the forum but this is the first time i post.

I would like to get feedback on this video... when I show friends my videos they say they are very good(I really dont think so), I think maybe they say that just because we are friends.

So! I would like to get unbiased feedback on it

Now, I know only the first notes of the video are kind of right, then just some improvisation comes and i really dont make use of particular scales or anything(dont know them...)...

So here is it:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WztecwxRLgM

 

[zenmindbeginner]

Re: Can you give me feedback( "The loner jam")

I'm more interested in your arithmetic... that's an interesting equation you've got there.

The Loner jam + sh** - YamiFranck = best thread in tips and clips section I have seen since I joined here.

I consider this an early birthday present, thank you everyone.

 

[YamiFrankc]

Re: Can you give me feedback( "The loner jam")

But... what do you think of the actual video?

 

[vmipat]

Re: Can you give me feedback( "The loner jam")

In my humble opinion, you need to center yourself in the field of view. Then lower the volume on the guitar to match your backing track. Your overall sound is distorting the recording so record at a lower setting. Your string bending is not quite where it needs to be but time and practice will help you there. Try a cleaner sound.
Most importantly, know what you are playing before you publish your recording unless you are specifically putting your own interpretation to the piece.
Don't stop, just keep practicing.

 

[Chickenwings]

Re: Can you give me feedback( "The loner jam")

I can hear your ears working.

 

[Funkfingers]

Re: Can you give me feedback( "The loner jam")

I cannot get past the combination of digital modelling overdrive through a camcorder microphone. Sorry.

 

[Rockstar216]

Re: Can you give me feedback( "The loner jam")

Ok I will say I did not watch all of it but from the first minute I did watch I have to honestly say It was not that great of a performance. The tone I don't mind but the playing I will say needs improving. Your phrasing is not that great more like you were just playing randomly with no direction. I think you have the potential to do a great vid but you need more practice with your playing first. If your going to play the song learn it if your going to improvise over the backing track try to do simple and tasteful phrasing rather than just being all over the place and let your notes say something. Also your bends and vibrato need work as well try practicing just bending to the correct note and doing your vibrato in time as well.

 

[DankStar]

Re: Can you give me feedback( "The loner jam")

I like it but something's off - maybe you're not tuned the same as the dealio? At any rate, better than I could do with that piece.

 

[kramersteen]

Re: Can you give me feedback( "The loner jam")

ummmmm not great man but your getting there. don't try and jazz it up with to many extra fills and **** just play it like gary did then once you master that make it your own. I can actually play this song no worries start to finish, i was at a mates the other day and i played it to him and he cried because he said it was emotional. it blew me away that i was able to do that...

There is a spot on guitar pro track for this.

 

[YamiFrankc]

Re: Can you give me feedback( "The loner jam")

Hey, thank you all

I did not notice I had replies on here until now.
I will keep practicing :kabong: