I Can Feel Your Heart Beat (Song for Maddy)

[cream123]

written for my girlfriend....supposed to sound like young love. made it at 2:30 AM ish
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8463392


an hour and a half....my best I'd say in general

let me know what you think and if it represented that playful yet somewhat serious tone that is contained in young love...


thanks much!

 

[ImmortalSix]

Re: I Can Feel Your Heart Beat (Song for Maddy)

Wow man, I like it!

Reminds me of the music from "50 First Dates"

The 8-bit thing, that is very campy and cool.

You ever think of adding movie quotes or some other audio in the back of the mix?

 

[80's_Metal]

Re: I Can Feel Your Heart Beat (Song for Maddy)

certainly sound like young love

 

[innerdreamrecords.co]

Re: I Can Feel Your Heart Beat (Song for Maddy)

There's a lot to like in this one, good job!

If I have a critique it would be to develop a few good ideas and follow a more rigid structure, e.g. ABABCBB song format. You tend to have too many ideas imho and they leave me felling lost.

 

[cream123]

Re: I Can Feel Your Heart Beat (Song for Maddy)

Innerdreamrecords.co, I see what you are saying...I'll work on it

 

[Lazarus1140]

Re: I Can Feel Your Heart Beat (Song for Maddy)

That's a good one, Marc. I can hear it as music behind a scene in a movie.

 

[everdrone]

Re: I Can Feel Your Heart Beat (Song for Maddy)

Napoleon dynamite background music lolerz!! good job d00d! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aqpBs8q9iZQ

I never spent more than 4 hours writing/recording any of my songz, not too polished