"I Could Feel" -Heavy Metal full song Godsmack/AIC/

[everdrone]

lm using my cheapo $200 epi sg with EMG 81-85 into podfarm...ya ya, I know not the revered tone round these parts, but Im tryin; gotta keep truckin; here is my song - any feedback is great - means alot to me!

link:

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9115079

cheers, maybe some system of a downz sounds too

 

[innerdreamrecords.co]

Re: "I Could Feel" -Heavy Metal full song Godsmack/AIC/

Well, I really like your rock tunes and riffs. With pro production this could kick major butt, just like your other rocker I liked so much. My critique is your vocal delivery, I like the melody and the style but you're not convincing in delivery. I imagine your holding back because of noise? Anyhow, you've got something with these couple of songs so keep working on performance.

 

[daemon barbeque]

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I like the FAT sound! The guitar sound is amazing! The vocals need some more work for the right feeling.
The ideas are cool!

 

[everdrone]

Re: "I Could Feel" -Heavy Metal full song Godsmack/AIC/

Well, I really like your rock tunes and riffs. With pro production this could kick major butt, just like your other rocker I liked so much. My critique is your vocal delivery, I like the melody and the style but you're not convincing in delivery. I imagine your holding back because of noise? Anyhow, you've got something with these couple of songs so keep working on performance.

Many thanks! this means alot to me, cause I dig your music and production. There are alot of factors why my vocals arent up to snuff - I need lessons, Im loud but straining, and vocals are too loud for apartment living methinks...Many thanks for the constructive criticism. I took the vocals down, guitar and bass is my priority these days, many thanks!!

I like the FAT sound! The guitar sound is amazing! The vocals need some more work for the right feeling.
The ideas are cool!

Very cool brutha, I appreciate this a ton! :beerchug:

 

[innerdreamrecords.co]

Re: "I Could Feel" -Heavy Metal full song Godsmack/AIC/

vocals are too loud for apartment living methinks

Yep, I know this problem. When you're hesitant it come across on the track. I use to take my laptop to a rehearsal studio with a Toneport and track guitars, you could do this with your vocals if you have a laptop.

 

[That90'sGuy]

Re: "I Could Feel" -Heavy Metal full song Godsmack/AIC/

I like it a lot It definitely has that more modern hard rock vibe to it, you nailed it with spades. FWIW, I think you're playing is a lot more interesting than Godsmack. The modulation adds some depth and reminds me of something that Korn or Sevendust would do. Am I missing something, I don't hear any vocals on the stream that I'm listening to? Overall though, it's a great start and I'm looking forward to hearing it when it's finished.

 

[innerdreamrecords.co]

Re: "I Could Feel" -Heavy Metal full song Godsmack/AIC/

What tuning did you use for the guitars?

 

[everdrone]

Re: "I Could Feel" -Heavy Metal full song Godsmack/AIC/

Yep, I know this problem. When you're hesitant it come across on the track. I use to take my laptop to a rehearsal studio with a Toneport and track guitars, you could do this with your vocals if you have a laptop.

Thanks brutha, this is a good idea! I got inspired and used my headphones and psyched myself up in that respect! I did a ONE TAKE for vox and then listened to it...

it blew my mind!

I like it a lot It definitely has that more modern hard rock vibe to it, you nailed it with spades. FWIW, I think you're playing is a lot more interesting than Godsmack. The modulation adds some depth and reminds me of something that Korn or Sevendust would do. Am I missing something, I don't hear any vocals on the stream that I'm listening to? Overall though, it's a great start and I'm looking forward to hearing it when it's finished.

AWesome! Many thanks brutha. Its done! put a fork in it! I did a one-take for vocals and channeled my numetal Jonathan Davis spirit up! I did not pitch correct or anything. it blew my mind!!!!

What tuning did you use for the guitars?

Im a black sabbath fan, I tune to c# and use the lightest strings possible JUST LIKE IOMMI!

 

[That90'sGuy]

Re: "I Could Feel" -Heavy Metal full song Godsmack/AIC/

AWesome! Many thanks brutha. Its done! put a fork in it! I did a one-take for vocals and channeled my numetal Jonathan Davis spirit up! I did not pitch correct or anything. it blew my mind!!!!

Good job man You really did channel in some Jonathan Davis on this! The music before had given me that kinda vibe, but the vocals definitely send it into that territory. I think it sounds great, get the thing mixed because the song has some serious "balls" to it. :fing2:

 

[everdrone]

Re: "I Could Feel" -Heavy Metal full song Godsmack/AIC/

cool brutha! Many thanks. This means alot to me!! Ill come back to this one and polish up the vox a bit and maybe mix some more...Im excited about the vocals, cause my song Bullet is set for vocals too. cheers! :beerchug:

 

[everdrone]

Re: "I Could Feel" -Heavy Metal full song Godsmack/AIC/

bump for new mix

 

[80's_Metal]

Re: "I Could Feel" -Heavy Metal full song Godsmack/AIC/

You Fokkin Nailed that song bro!
I got my horns up over here!
Super kudos..

 

[innerdreamrecords.co]

Re: "I Could Feel" -Heavy Metal full song Godsmack/AIC/

Vocals are much better! Good job. They could sit better in the mix.

 

[everdrone]

Re: "I Could Feel" -Heavy Metal full song Godsmack/AIC/

You Fokkin Nailed that song bro!
I got my horns up over here!
Super kudos..

Yehawwwwww!!! hellz ya!!! Thanks for listening bro, super happy about this!! Glad its horns up goodness! Thanks again!!!! :headbang::headbang::headbang:

Vocals are much better! Good job. They could sit better in the mix.

Thanks bro! Your critiques are really inspiring, I read them closely, I will think about this mixing, I definitely dont do too much with mixing the higher frequencies except for cutting them out from the bass; the drums arent mixed at all frequency high pass/low pass wise, so I eventually plan on working on that one day for my mixes, I spend about 4 hours on each song writing and recording...

Thanks innerdreamrecordsco!!