I need some general help with lyrics: new heavy metal full song

[everdrone]

hey I recorded this heavy metal song with a huge riffage and bassline. I need some general help with lyrics, here is the song:

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=9047946
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I cant afford to be paying anyone royalties so your donating your ideas to me if you will! its for a good cause tho lol

 

[innerdreamrecords.co]

Re: I need some general help with lyrics: new heavy metal full song

Kill, death, rape, pillage, then go home to the cat and pet the pussy.

That's all I got.

 

[everdrone]

Re: I need some general help with lyrics: new heavy metal full song

thats deep lol

maybe something along those lines but more ambiguous? hmm...

 

[ImmortalSix]

Re: I need some general help with lyrics: new heavy metal full song

Get

Get what you want

Get what you need

Get what you love

and so on

 

[innerdreamrecords.co]

Re: I need some general help with lyrics: new heavy metal full song

Put in some cookie monster **** and you have a song. ^

 

[everdrone]

Re: I need some general help with lyrics: new heavy metal full song

lolerz

thx

its for a good cause tho lol mainly making people happy and for general intoxication purposes

 

[ex-250]

Re: I need some general help with lyrics: new heavy metal full song

i dunno...why ruin it? seems pretty badass as just instrumental.

 

[Ninja Monkey]

Re: I need some general help with lyrics: new heavy metal full song

Put a gun to my head
Don't give a damn if you shoot
Every time I see my heart
It makes me hate you

(RAAAAAAAWR)

No more hell on Earth
I'm on the other side
Don't fcuking care what it was worth
'Cause all that I loved had died

(RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWR)

*guitar solo*

[Repeat first verse]

Merry Christmas
:lmao:

 

[everdrone]

Re: I need some general help with lyrics: new heavy metal full song

Get

Get what you want

Get what you need

Get what you love

and so on

Right on, I dig, has some beatles hints of influence but really ambiguous!

i dunno...why ruin it? seems pretty badass as just instrumental.

lol Im stoked on this haha

Put a gun to my head
Don't give a damn if you shoot
Every time I see my heart
It makes me hate you

(RAAAAAAAWR)

No more hell on Earth
I'm on the other side
Don't fcuking care what it was worth
'Cause all that I loved had died

(RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWR)

*guitar solo*

[Repeat first verse]

Merry Christmas
:lmao:

yes!! You have talentz!! :arms::usa:

 

[El Dunco]

Re: I need some general help with lyrics: new heavy metal full song

Sounds Sabbath-esque.

 

[DankStar]

Re: I need some general help with lyrics: new heavy metal full song

Ritualistic Killing

The pyramid opens, the minions line up
Into its caverns, the elders are shut
Pray to the sky gods, chanting the oath
Slaughter the weakened, their blood for the goat

Ritualistic Killing!
Satisfy the gods!
Ritualistic Killing!
Die for our cause!

at's all I got.

 

[innerdreamrecords.co]

Re: I need some general help with lyrics: new heavy metal full song

Ritualistic Killing

The pyramid opens, the minions line up
Into its caverns, the elders are shut
Pray to the sky gods, chanting the oath
Slaughter the weakened, their blood for the goat

Ritualistic Killing!
Satisfy the gods!
Ritualistic Killing!
Die for our cause!

at's all I got.

That's a winner! Just needs some cookie monster ad libs.

 

[DankStar]

Re: I need some general help with lyrics: new heavy metal full song

That's a winner! Just needs some cookie monster ad libs.

a few grunts and tom g. warrior "hey!"s and it's a done deal.

 

[astrozombie]

Re: I need some general help with lyrics: new heavy metal full song

I thought of ozzy right away. I approve!

dont know about lyrics. sorry. do this: instead of sitting with the song and writting to it, write a sort of poem, completely independent, then make it fit to the music. this is what i do when listening to the song wont work for me.

PS- are those real drums? if not, what did you use?

 

[Funkfingers]

Re: I need some general help with lyrics: new heavy metal full song

I thought of ozzy right away. I approve!

I thought of The Tubes. Add a Chapman Stick bass line and it could whiff of King Crimson.

PS- are those real drums? if not, what did you use?

Obviously programmed. Rhythmically too stiff. Sonically too consistent. They don't push and pull enough against the other parts to be real time human skin/pad abuse.

 

[ehdwuld]

Re: I need some general help with lyrics: new heavy metal full song

I thought of ozzy right away. I approve!

dont know about lyrics. sorry. do this: instead of sitting with the song and writting to it, write a sort of poem, completely independent, then make it fit to the music. this is what i do when listening to the song wont work for me.

PS- are those real drums? if not, what did you use?

+1
I usually run a phrase round my head like a riff
for a few hours
then see an image of story I wanna tell

then describe the scene or story in great detail
just like a riff

like the phrase
" wrong place at the wrong time"
is there ever a right time to be in a wrong place
its been the wrong place the whole time
you just hung round till the wrong time rolled up
and said heres your epiphany

break it up
and add chorus

is there ever a right time
to be in a wrong place
its been the wrong place
the whole time

but no
its not the time
and theres no reason why

you just hung round
till the wrong time
rolled up and said
heres your epiphany

but no
its not the time
and theres no reason why

 

[Tor]

Re: I need some general help with lyrics: new heavy metal full song

i dunno...why ruin it? seems pretty badass as just instrumental.

+1 Good stuff, man!

 

[everdrone]

Re: I need some general help with lyrics: new heavy metal full song

Sounds Sabbath-esque.

Sweet! Many thanks

Ritualistic Killing

The pyramid opens, the minions line up.

Thats pretty awesome bro! I need to add a little from each of these, they are great imo!

I thought of ozzy right away. I approve!...PS- are those real drums? if not, what did you use?

Many thanks! This means alot to me! I use ezdrummer, but with the DFH drum patterns. My drummer thought I was playing the drums or a drumpad or something, but once you start using em, you recognize fake drums immediately unless your listening to electronica or meshuggah where things are supposed to be mechanical precision soundingz...

I thought of The Tubes. Add a Chapman Stick bass line and it could whiff of King Crimson..

Many thanks! Im pretty happy haha

+1
I usually run a phrase round my head like a riff
for a few hours
then see an image of story I wanna tell

then describe the scene or story in great detail
just like a riff[/B]

Pretty awesome brutha! I kinda like your beginning sentence too, I may use that as well haha Thanks

+1 Good stuff, man!

Thanks brutha! This means alot :beerchug: I usually do only 3 takes when I do vocals, so Ill spend more time on this one when I get around to it, and just keep the instrumental up as well...glad I have alot of gigs to get ready for, my band plays teh 3 hour sets so I gotta git r done