My first recording. Don't be too harsh.

[dmandude123455]

This is it, my first recording. Its not done yet, I need to clean it up a bit and get the other instruments in there, but I wanted to know what you guys thought about it. How could it be better???
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http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=10407361&q=hi

 

[Sixstringer]

Re: My first recording. Don't be too harsh.

This is it, my first recording. Its not done yet, I need to clean it up a bit and get the other instruments in there, but I wanted to know what you guys thought about it. How could it be better???
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http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=10407361&q=hi

Reminds me of old school metal like the band "Accept".....

 

[innerdreamrecords.co]

Re: My first recording. Don't be too harsh.

Not bad. I need to hear it with the other instruments. There seems to be a few timing issues in some parts, hard to tell without drums.

 

[daemon barbeque]

Re: My first recording. Don't be too harsh.

I like it, well played. There are timing issues indeed, but you would overcome it with a drum machine. The tone is cool, needs more brilliance. But that can be done with proper EQing and widening. Oh and it needs a bit "less" reverb.

 

[Jakek5150]

Re: My first recording. Don't be too harsh.

Very cool man. Like innerdreams said before, it'd be better if it had drums in it too and there are times that it doesn't seem to exactly be in the right rhythm. The tone and riffs are great though. Do you mind me asking how you recorded it(like what recording software or whatever you used)? It seems to have a strong Scorpions/Judas Priest influence.

 

[dmandude123455]

Re: My first recording. Don't be too harsh.

Very cool man. Like innerdreams said before, it'd be better if it had drums in it too and there are times that it doesn't seem to exactly be in the right rhythm. The tone and riffs are great though. Do you mind me asking how you recorded it(like what recording software or whatever you used)? It seems to have a strong Scorpions/Judas Priest influence.

Audcity and a guitar hero mic :|.....and yes heavy priest influence. i was going for more maiden stuff but its ok

 

[Lazarus1140]

Re: My first recording. Don't be too harsh.

Sounds good to me. Once the timing is locked in it will be great!

 

[El Dunco]

Re: My first recording. Don't be too harsh.

Very 80's Metallica. The solo phrases and tone reminds me of Kirk Hammett. I think using less gain on the rhythm guitars would tighten it up alot.

 

[Ninja Monkey]

Re: My first recording. Don't be too harsh.

Audcity and a guitar hero mic :|

dude.
that is the best rig known to man.
(speaking from personal experience)

solid tone, classic styling, very cool.
adddrumsplznao

 

[DankStar]

Re: My first recording. Don't be too harsh.

dig it. felt like I was actually in Medusa's Lair.

 

[Jakek5150]

Re: My first recording. Don't be too harsh.

Audcity and a guitar hero mic :|.....and yes heavy priest influence. i was going for more maiden stuff but its ok

Cool. Thanks for the response. The audio seems so clear. It may sound like Maiden, but I'm not sure since they're one of those bands I've just never gotten around to listening much yet. :smack: Although I heard a couple of tracks from the new album and I liked it.