TwilightOdyssey
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New single from my melodic rock/no wave band, FM RADIO : Run Away
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Phantasmagoria
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Re: New single from my melodic rock/no wave band, FM RADIO : Run Away
Pretty heavy for radio rock :laugh2: It started off like a Maiden tune..
Great sound & music/instrumental bits, but the vocals are'nt my thing....I'm sure people will dig them though :bigthumb:
Pretty heavy for radio rock :laugh2: It started off like a Maiden tune..
Great sound & music/instrumental bits, but the vocals are'nt my thing....I'm sure people will dig them though :bigthumb:
Vasshu the humanoid typhoon
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Re: New single from my melodic rock/no wave band, FM RADIO : Run Away
Ah it is done!
I liked it...again this Blondie meets harder/proggish rock I dig
Ah it is done!
I liked it...again this Blondie meets harder/proggish rock I dig
TwilightOdyssey
Darkness on the edge of Tone
Re: New single from my melodic rock/no wave band, FM RADIO : Run Away
Ha! FM Radio is the name only, not the genre.
No worries, thanks for listening!
TwilightOdyssey
Darkness on the edge of Tone
Re: New single from my melodic rock/no wave band, FM RADIO : Run Away
Thanks! Yep, quite the mashup!!Ah it is done!
I liked it...again this Blondie meets harder/proggish rock I dig
Re: New single from my melodic rock/no wave band, FM RADIO : Run Away
To be honest as a singer myself i do like it but i would like to have a bit more reverb and a Quick delay to her voice to give a bit more deapth to the singing, i do hear a bit of effects on the guitar for me the right amount but people always forget that a little effects on the voice can make wonders to a songs, as long as It's not fraking autotune.
Maybe a bit of quick echo and not so much of a delay, but definitely more reverb because the voice is as said a bit dry no real dynamics to it.
To be honest as a singer myself i do like it but i would like to have a bit more reverb and a Quick delay to her voice to give a bit more deapth to the singing, i do hear a bit of effects on the guitar for me the right amount but people always forget that a little effects on the voice can make wonders to a songs, as long as It's not fraking autotune.
Maybe a bit of quick echo and not so much of a delay, but definitely more reverb because the voice is as said a bit dry no real dynamics to it.
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NecroPolo
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Re: New single from my melodic rock/no wave band, FM RADIO : Run Away
I like it, it has a degree of heaviness to it.
A couple of things that could be improved:
- there are too many weak spots in the vocal tracks, dynamic and intonation issues and it's also too dry to the music behind. If you like the feel of the tracks recorded you slam/tune/wet the hell out of her any time. Well, literally.
- the drums are too stiff in places. The snare / kick are great but the crash on the left sounds polyethylene and too much in your face.
I like it, it has a degree of heaviness to it.
A couple of things that could be improved:
- there are too many weak spots in the vocal tracks, dynamic and intonation issues and it's also too dry to the music behind. If you like the feel of the tracks recorded you slam/tune/wet the hell out of her any time. Well, literally.
- the drums are too stiff in places. The snare / kick are great but the crash on the left sounds polyethylene and too much in your face.
TwilightOdyssey
Darkness on the edge of Tone
Re: New single from my melodic rock/no wave band, FM RADIO : Run Away
Thanks, Zhaggy and Necro!
Thanks, Zhaggy and Necro!
Vasshu the humanoid typhoon
Unseen
Re: New single from my melodic rock/no wave band, FM RADIO : Run Away
Hmm funny I liked that it was dry'ish and not overly sugarcoated...
Hmm funny I liked that it was dry'ish and not overly sugarcoated...
everdrone
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Re: New single from my melodic rock/no wave band, FM RADIO : Run Away
killer singer, nice work!
Hope you like.
killer singer, nice work!
TwilightOdyssey
Darkness on the edge of Tone
Re: New single from my melodic rock/no wave band, FM RADIO : Run Away
Thanks!
Thanks!
Kamanda~SD
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Re: New single from my melodic rock/no wave band, FM RADIO : Run Away
I like it. you know how I feel about your crash cymbals so I won't even say it.
Other than the few spots where the vocalist is shaky (meh!) I think the vocals are great...BUT I do feel like they arn't quite sitting in with everything else. Just my $0.02.
I like it. you know how I feel about your crash cymbals so I won't even say it.
Other than the few spots where the vocalist is shaky (meh!) I think the vocals are great...BUT I do feel like they arn't quite sitting in with everything else. Just my $0.02.
TwilightOdyssey
Darkness on the edge of Tone
Re: New single from my melodic rock/no wave band, FM RADIO : Run Away
Thanks, Kamanda!
Thanks, Kamanda!
AmirH
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Re: New single from my melodic rock/no wave band, FM RADIO : Run Away
I agree with those who said the vocal track is too dry, but I also think after the first bit (one foot in front the other) the vocals didn't have a consistent enough melody for me to latch onto. It kind of felt like she was supporting the guitars instead of the other way around, so this could probably benefit from some revision IMHO. I do like how that riff idea ended up developing though!
I agree with those who said the vocal track is too dry, but I also think after the first bit (one foot in front the other) the vocals didn't have a consistent enough melody for me to latch onto. It kind of felt like she was supporting the guitars instead of the other way around, so this could probably benefit from some revision IMHO. I do like how that riff idea ended up developing though!
TwilightOdyssey
Darkness on the edge of Tone
Re: New single from my melodic rock/no wave band, FM RADIO : Run Away
Thanks for listening and feeding back!
Thanks for listening and feeding back!
