New Song Idea (instrumental pop)

[StrangeSound]

So, I went kinda back to the roots. No jazz, funk etc. in here.

Brett Garsed´s track "Brothers" inspiried me somehow, although it´s completely different

It´s just an idea..what do you think about it? Did you hear a melody like this one before? The intro doesn´t go flawlessly into the A section but it´s just an idea.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=275337&songID=3737353

Enjoy it!

 

[VoodooChild]

Re: New Song Idea (instrumental pop)

not bad...
but it's too "poppy" (? ^^) for me =)

 

[larry_emder]

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I like

 

[Peterku]

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I like it. There are some really interesting phrases in there, and the tone's also very pleasant.

 

[StrangeSound]

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Thanks guys!

 

[seafoamer]

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nyce stuff, dood.

The 2nd verse is too long. Right when u start gradually build up with those 2 higher bends u should keep building up (maybe add that cool harmonic u do later on) & get right back into that chorus. If it's pop ur after, u gotta give ppl the hook, & give it to them often.

nyce phrasing, too.

 

[Osensei]

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Nice theme! Not sure I like the bridge though. Kinda R&B hip-hoppish to me. I hate to be the one to break it to you, but this still fits the jazz category man! Sorta like a Russ Freeman/Rippington's kinda grove. Just face it! You been jazz infected dude! You got the full blown decease.

 

[jimmy]

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It sounds like the kinda song you hear in the Dentist's office. I like.

 

[StrangeSound]

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nyce stuff, dood.

The 2nd verse is too long. Right when u start gradually build up with those 2 higher bends u should keep building up (maybe add that cool harmonic u do later on) & get right back into that chorus. If it's pop ur after, u gotta give ppl the hook, & give it to them often.

nyce phrasing, too.

Thanks for the tip man! Yeah, that´s right..I was messing around too much for a straight pop thing.

Nice theme! Not sure I like the bridge though. Kinda R&B hip-hoppish to me. I hate to be the one to break it to you, but this still fits the jazz category man! Sorta like a Russ Freeman/Rippington's kinda grove. Just face it! You been jazz infected dude! You got the full blown decease.

Haha! Love your posts..I don´t know what I can do about it!!

It sounds like the kinda song you hear in the Dentist's office. I like.

Hehe, also nice one! I´ve never heared music in the dentist´s office :laugh2:
Only a tv is there..hehe well..cool, thanks

 

[Vasshu the humanoid typhoon]

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Dunno I liked the different setup for a popsong
Sweet sounds too, you got a great touch SS.
Niels

 

[ratherdashing]

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Very cool! You have a very fluid, almost vocal style to your playing. I love the chorus riff!

+1 to all foamy's comments too.

 

[nuntius]

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Very nice man. The chorus is especially good.

:headbang:

 

[tone4days]

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very cool stuff .. the tone and phrases are top quality ... it's not so poppy that the riff sticks in my head but the overall thing keep my attention and is very chill

the hints of harmonized bits made me want more of it

thanks for sharing it

t4d

 

[StrangeSound]

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A BIG thank you to all of you!

It´s a POD 2...the sound is ok in my ears but there´s almost no dynamic in it which makes it hard to deal with

 

[daemon barbeque]

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I liked it alot.It's really makes me calm down and get a cool happy mood.Nice tone and very nice bass!!!i would not define it as pop , but what else??no idea!!!
You know i like your style.keep on groooooooovin!!

 

[Osensei]

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Grow a mullet! LOL!

 

[SOLO GUITAR STEWIE]

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very cool stuff .. the tone and phrases are top quality ... it's not so poppy that the riff sticks in my head but the overall thing keep my attention and is very chill

the hints of harmonized bits made me want more of it

thanks for sharing it

t4d

+1 to all T4D said...great fluid playing and tone...but sorry to say this isnt you
you are more the experimental, jazz and smooth stuff than popy sorry..

chris

 

[StrangeSound]

Re: New Song Idea (instrumental pop)

+1 to all T4D said...great fluid playing and tone...but sorry to say this isnt you
you are more the experimental, jazz and smooth stuff than popy sorry..

chris

Thanks Stewie

I´m not trying to be too "popish" but I thought this would be kinda pop

I´m glad that you classify my (other) stuff as experimental, jazz and smooth