New Song Idea... what else to add ?

[SongsForTheDeaf]

phone recording of me and my drummer working on a song.. .Can't figure out what to add in though and where... its pretty short

 

[everdrone]

Re: New Song Idea... what else to add ?

cool song! I dig man

 

[Chickenwings]

Re: New Song Idea... what else to add ?

Lyics and/or a melody.
Sounds great so far!

 

[SongsForTheDeaf]

Re: New Song Idea... what else to add ?

thanks guys!... I'll work on getting some lyrics done. I feel a bridge would be good too, something like a slowdown sludgy part maybe.

Sorry for the quality it is just my phone. I will start posting actual recorded stuff soon! I have 2 bands working on recording at the moment