dude, you gotta get a guitar soon, I feel your pain, hope 'Barry' figures some things out about the economy here pretty soon Good imagery with the lyrics. I like the first verse. Thats some huge bass on the first part of the song. I prefer a little less of the delay cause in parts it overlaps 2 notes.
Singing is pretty awesome as usual.
I more a fan of organic sounds in general, but the synths are pretty awesome in this song, very tastefully done. When you say "is it money?" It might be cool to have the delay emphasized on "money" and "game", or maybe backup singing on a 1st-5th or 1-3 interval (not octave). To make it more busy during the chorus. Im just hearing the bass and snare and cymbols, not much of the toms(?) through my studio monitors. Crash cymbols are loosing definition - my compression/limiters do that to my songs too I think? I like the bridge there - cool synths and note choices for singing. In other parts of the song I want your singing to sound stronger but that may be the mic? I dunno. Im being picky & rambling about stuff, hope it helps a bit somewhere
Man that sounds awesome. I won't talk about the mix since it's a demo. The feel is really cool. Think about playing it in Deathstra on a 50000000 watt sound system LOL.
You show some sweet side of your voice here and I rather like it. The only annoying part is where you say "naaamee" and go higher. There have to be some improvement or change LOL. Everything is excelent!
I think when my cash flow is better I'll hire a drummer for this and also do some guitars in a proper studio - hopefully that will tame the vocal part in the chorus that BBQ is annoyed by. LOL I hear it in my head with guitars, should rock it out a bit more.