Smiling (New tune)

[cream123]

Hey ya'll, this is kind of a shout out to some buddies who went down a bad road with drugs and addiction and such. I hope you all enjoy it!

I'm spinning inside my head
keeps turning the lights
on and off
The midnight oil is burning
my body is curling
I'm stuck in a hard spot
and I'll say some ****
to make you leave
my troubles always seem to come in three
the father, the son, and the holy ghost
the aging, the infant and who I know

He sat there for days
looking out in amazement
at what remained of
his prior engagements
replaying in place
the tapes that stated
his only hopes of staying sedated
He was told an evil demon lived inside of him
an excuse he used to sanctify dying smiling

But now turning away
from all the stains
that cover his clothing
its not our place to speak of others this way

i'm spinning inside my head keeps turning
my eyes on and off
I'm trying to fix this
this simple existence
malfunctions in my brain

He was told an evil demon
lived inside of him
an excuse he used to sanctify dying smiling

 

[AmirH]

Re: Smiling (New tune)

Great work! Lyrics wise I'm really fond of this part:
"He was told an evil demon lived inside of him
an excuse he used to sanctify dying smiling

But now turning away
from all the stains
that cover his clothing
its not our place to speak of others this way

i'm spinning inside my head keeps turning
my eyes on and off
I'm trying to fix this
this simple existence
malfunctions in my brain

He was told an evil demon
lived inside of him
an excuse he used to sanctify dying smiling"

The first chunk relied a bit too heavy on common-place sayings. Having said that, this is probably the best vocal delivery I've heard from you. I knew the gods bestowed you with golden vohiculars . Keep up the good work.