Yeah, some cool riffs and ideas.
But like I said before on here, it's nice when people who want feedback also post feedback on other things in this section. Rather than just signing up and posting their song.
the drums are buried, the guitar has tremolo/vibrato on the distortion? you would get a more defined chug with less distortion, turn down the gain. did you use any compression on the guitars? you should. in all, cool riffs, could use some doctoring up on the recordingz...