It's late, but it looks ok to my bleery eyes. Seems like a clean, usable layout to me.
For position 3, you want the screw & slug coils of each pickup in series but the pickups in parallel with each other, right?
This is nitpicking, but on the 2 right-hand poles, you don't need the neck red/white connection in positions 1 & 2 or the bridge red/white connections in positions 4 & 5.
BTW you are using a master tone/master volume here, aren't you?
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