Thrash song

[Rotten Guitar String]

I just made a start on a Slayer/Metallica-ish thrash song.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/therottenguitarstring_music.htm
It's called "Hail to Clock Face"

MUST BE HEARD ON HI-FI !!!
Lo-fi will ruin the effect because it's mono.

This is just a rough draft, so it's not played very well and sounds a bit chopped up because I kept deleting/moving bits.

Please give me some feedback/suggestions
Thanks

 

[HetfieldRules]

Re: Thrash song

not bad..i really like the beginging...def metallica type thing w/ the clean intro into the heavy part. i think in the second part where it's just playing in the left ear and then the right ear jumps in after two you should have the left ear along once, then have the right ear hit on certain power chords u hit..like very choppy..idk if that makes any sense to anyone else but me...neway i tried..gotta give you some feedback seeing as u took the time to listen to my stuff. keep it up...and nice tone man i liked it

 

[Rotten Guitar String]

Re: Thrash song

Thanks for the tips man, I'll try doing that.

 

[Vasshu the humanoid typhoon]

Re: Thrash song

Heavy for sure
Really liked the arppergiated rhythmstuff, tight and cool.

 

[Rotten Guitar String]

Re: Thrash song

Thanks Rid

 

[Rotten Guitar String]

Re: Thrash song

I can't decide whether to make the fast riff the main verse riff or start a new riff where that clip ends...

Can anyone help me out?