Whiskey Sunlight (with vocals)

[cream123]

hey everyone, I think I posted something similar to this a while back...I've changed it almost entirely
I didn't know it was possible to make something this compressed...

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[cream123]

Re: Whiskey Sunlight (with vocals)

Updated version!

 

[Markk]

Re: Whiskey Sunlight (with vocals)

Marc, I'll be straight with you (and these are just comments from a first impression)

Your T's are off in the over dub [when you sing ...Tonight]. It's something that seems to catch my ear.

The drums are really loud in the beginning. They sort of lose that loudness once everything else comes in, but it seems to stay loud. In fact, it sounds as if the whole song is just a tad loud (or maybe Soundcloud just makes it seem that way). I feel as if all the instruments are trying to force their way into the song, fighting for some breathing room.

I like the feel of the song. And I like these lyrics especially

Bring the moonshine
The whiskey sunlight
I don’t want to remember tonight

I hope you don't feel as if I'm hatin' on you :31:

 

[cream123]

Re: Whiskey Sunlight (with vocals)

Marc, I'll be straight with you (and these are just comments from a first impression)

Your T's are off in the over dub [when you sing ...Tonight]. It's something that seems to catch my ear.

The drums are really loud in the beginning. They sort of lose that loudness once everything else comes in, but it seems to stay loud. In fact, it sounds as if the whole song is just a tad loud (or maybe Soundcloud just makes it seem that way). I feel as if all the instruments are trying to force their way into the song, fighting for some breathing room.

I like the feel of the song. And I like these lyrics especially

Bring the moonshine
The whiskey sunlight
I don’t want to remember tonight

I hope you don't feel as if I'm hatin' on you :31:

Lol, dude thanks so much. I've waited for this kind of criticism from this board for months. I'll make the necessary changes!