You(sed) to

[cream123]

I Got broken up with (out of a two year relationship) a couple of weeks ago and I finally sat down and did the musician thing to do and wrote a song about it. lulz. Aside from how cliche it is to write a song about a girl leaving you, I am proud of it lyrically and guitar work! I am interested to your guys opinions!

Excuse the lofi...I forgot my mic and interface so this is with my laptop mic and guitar...one take.



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Lyrics:
It used to be
that I was used to me
The life I lived
The dream I was in

Breathing in life
you killed the night
take it all away
make that mistake

Chor:
We got used to one another
and love grew old
it withered and wilted
as time took its tole

The heat that once sweltered
is smothered and cold
we wrapped it in blankets
suffocated its soul

Verse 2:
Get used to me
not being there when you go to sleep
We used to be two as one
reduced to strangers in all in all

I awoke from that dream
I remember it so faintly

Chor 2:
We got used to one another
and love grew old
it withered and wilted
as time took its tole

The heat that once sweltered
is smothered and cold
we wrapped it in blankets
suffocated its soul

But we could search
for tinder, kindle and fuel
and in the nature of it all
get back to where we know

Outro:
where used to know..

 

[cream123]

Re: You(sed) to

bump. Any feedback is appreciated

 

[innerdreamrecords.co]

Re: You(sed) to

The guitars sound nice. I think that is too low for you to sing, try bringing it up an octave.

 

[ImmortalSix]

Re: You(sed) to

Love the guitar tone you have. What guitar / amp are you playing?

I am not a great critic of lyrics; so I'll abstain from remarking. I am more of a music guy.

 

[Vasshu the humanoid typhoon]

Re: You(sed) to

Uh sounds almost like Tom Waits little brother at places....
Nice tune though....women(little girls) on the other hand at that age....

 

[cream123]

Re: You(sed) to

Love the guitar tone you have. What guitar / amp are you playing?

I am not a great critic of lyrics; so I'll abstain from remarking. I am more of a music guy.

That is my strat with the Phat Cat in the neck through the memory man with hazarai into my ampeg ministack bass amp

Room mic'd with the laptop!