Latest recording - pop/electronica

[flank]

hey all, been getting into beatmaking and synth production, got up the latest version of an old song of mine. please take a listen and let me know what you think!

http://soundcloud.com/wildcatdotdotdot/wildcat-dot-dot-dot-digital-alarm-clock

[Ninja Monkey]

Re: Latest recording - pop/electronica

i liked the tones you used for leads.
two things i would recommend: bass. i didn't hear much, if any bass, and it just didn't give it the low drive that it needed. it felt slightly empty. secondly, it seemed to lack tensions in chord structure, which made it boring if you aren't paying strict attention.

overall it had a fun feel, and the vocals made it cool.
thumbs up.
:]

[Andrew Lamprecht]

Re: Latest recording - pop/electronica

It sounded pretty good but it does need more bass. more push.

[Markk]

Re: Latest recording - pop/electronica

I liked that. Like a cool summer tune to put on in the morning. Even my wife agreed

[flank]

Re: Latest recording - pop/electronica

hey guys, thanks for listenin! i actually agreed on your thoughts about the low end, so i went back and EQ'd a bit for more emphasis on the bass. Its a little more solid.

heres the new link!

http://soundcloud.com/wildcatdotdotdot/wildcat-dot-dot-dot-digitalalarmclock

[flank]

Re: Latest recording - pop/electronica

also, about the chord structure thing - i actually love to use all kinds of wacky and interesting chords, and most of my songs are chord heavy. but this is the exception. this song is basically minimalist on the music side, with the vocal melody carrying any variety. but hey, its a pop song - who cares! haha

[flank]

Re: Latest recording - pop/electronica

bump