always with me always with you played by me

[slash857]

http://media.putfile.com/Always-with-me-Always-with-you67

hey just recorded it today. any tips for me? iknow my timing is off in spots. the tone sucks i know its just me into amplitube so nothin special. i didnt feel like gettin my amp and mic set up today. well im just lookin for some constructive criticism! (compliments are nice too. :fingersx: )

 

[Lewguitar]

Re: always with me always with you played by me

Sounds good! My only comment would be to put more soul and more of yourself into it. Make it your own. Phrase it more like a vocal and more like you're saying something important to someone and you want them to understand your point and get what you're trying to communicate.

 

[slash857]

Re: always with me always with you played by me

yeah, it definitely sounds like im trying real hard to play it. it was a reach song. thanks lew.

 

[Fretology]

Re: always with me always with you played by me

Hey man.......thats a hell of a lot better than I could do........I could almost mistake it for the real thing in some parts. Don't give up, your'e right there.

 

[RGN]

Re: always with me always with you played by me

Pretty good... Lew is completely right though, a lot of that will come once you really get it under your fingers so it isn't a stretch. I'd probably use a little less gain and try to get a couple of those notes to really sing out.