Metallica clip, please give me tips and rate..

[g123]

CLIP ONLY WORKS ON LO-FI
Hey guys, I redid To Live is to Die off of the And Justice for All album, I did it for a guitar battle on a different site, and I wanted you guys to tell me what to improve, redo, and tell me what I played well (If I played well). Aside from production (the drums and bass sound muffled), please give me some tips.
I'm sorry guys but due to technical difficulties which probablly won't be solved, my song(s) could only be heard on LO-FI, but please don't let that bother you too much and make you not listen to it.

Enjoy guys:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/guykawka_music.htm

 

[Rotten Guitar String]

Re: Metallica clip, please give me tips and rate..

Sounded pretty good man.

You still need to work on your vibrato, it's hard to master, but it's one of the most important skills you can have.
Some of the bends sounded a little bit out of pitch too.

The rhythm was well played though.

 

[g123]

Re: Metallica clip, please give me tips and rate..

Thanks man, I guess I'm just a better rhythmn player than I am a lead player, but I'll work on that vibrato, any tips on it?

 

[Damage Inc.]

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Pretty good.
But what about playing the big part where you only hear the backing track (the clean and volume swell part) and the clean outro yourself too?
And after it just jump in the next solo and let the backing track just go on ofcourse.
For the rest it's just minor mistakes and I'm wondering if your using the bridge pickup on the times you should use it.
Cause sometimes it sounds very hollow like a neck pickup.
Oh well, I guess it's cause of the lo-fi version.
But it's going well.

- Damage Inc.

 

[Rotten Guitar String]

Re: Metallica clip, please give me tips and rate..

g123, heres a great thread on vibrato: https://forum.seymourduncan.com/showthread.php?t=34177&highlight=vibrato

 

[g123]

Re: Metallica clip, please give me tips and rate..

Thanks guys, I'm checking that thread out, and BTW I was using the bridge pup for rhythmn and neck pup for leads.

 

[Damage Inc.]

Re: Metallica clip, please give me tips and rate..

Thanks guys, I'm checking that thread out, and BTW I was using the bridge pup for rhythmn and neck pup for leads.

Oh ok, good I guess it's cause of the blurry sound that sounded a bit like a neck pickup.
So nvm, was just wondering : ) .

- Damage Inc.

 

[Davey]

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SC is down at the moment =/

 

[Rotten Guitar String]

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Soundclick can be a pain in the a$$ sometimes

 

[hellrider77]

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sounds pretty good man, just keep at it, you can only get better and better.

 

[g123]

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Davey- Soundclick should work now. Thanks hellrider- will do.

 

[Davey]

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sorry.. now i'm playing Demons & wizards, the clip will have to wait a little. way too kickass tone to stop it :headbang:

 

[g123]

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Oh lol ok, but please check my coer out once your done, I tried my best on this cover..

 

[g123]

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C'mon guys, anyone else willing to take a listen?

 

[TheLizardKing]

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it doesnt work bro

 

[g123]

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It should work now bro

 

[g123]

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C'mon guys it's working now you could check it out Davey and TheLizardKing...

 

[Nite_Maresz_25]

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awesome tone and playing man!!!

 

[HooDs]

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Cant seem to get to it now....damn SC but ill try later

 

[g123]

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Thanks nite