My attempt at commercial hard rock

[SpaceShipOne]

I've been listening to some commercial hard rock from Disciple for a few days trying to get ahold on another style of writing. Thought I'd give this a shot. "Stronghold"

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=408886

Completely reworked it drums and all.

 

[daemon barbeque]

Re: My attempt at commercial hard rock

Man that thing is too Metal.I dig it a lot...Great songwriting..But that is clearly not Hard rock.
It's def. Heavy Metal!

 

[SpaceShipOne]

Re: My attempt at commercial hard rock

REdid some stuff.

 

[innerdreamrecords.co]

Re: My attempt at commercial hard rock

Sounds cool good job Seraphim.

 

[Blue_Fingers_Jay]

Re: My attempt at commercial hard rock

Really dig the riff man, sounds like something Paul Gilbert would play, kick ass stuff.

 

[Virtual Kevorkian]

Re: My attempt at commercial hard rock

Yeah, too metal to really be commercial or hard rock. I dig it, nonetheless.

Entire mix sounds like the treble was rolled off, though - guitars have a great vibe to them, aside from that.