new song ish

[cream123]

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thoughts?

 

[cream123]

Re: new song ish

not done yet btw, but any thoughts?

 

[everdrone]

Re: new song ish

wow! your vocals sound the best here I think as of yet, Doors like.

drums need to be more present and complex though, seems to be one loop and the chorus is over the one music loop, bass and song structure maybe

 

[cream123]

Re: new song ish

thanks man. Its a work in progress as stated. Appreciate the constructive criticism

 

[cream123]

Re: new song ish

bump

 

[innerdreamrecords.co]

Re: new song ish

It does have a Doors vibe. The good thing is your vocal pitch sounds better. I would suggest using less reverb and add a delay instead or use both, try a plate reverb for vocals or mix a plate and a room/hall reverb. Also, compress the vocals more.

 

[cream123]

Re: new song ish

thx for the tips