New tune

[cream123]

Hey ya'll...just "finished" this track a bit ago...no vocals. Its the first song Ive composed in years...pretty simple. Let me know your thoughts

 

[TwilightOdyssey]

Re: New tune

Nice tone and textures. A bit rambling, however, in my opinion.

 

[AmirH]

Re: New tune

I really enjoyed this. Your playing and tone are excellent. It has a great moodiness to it and I love the return you use on the lead part. My first impression was that it was somber, simple, and beautiful. I think if you shortened it by 30s-1 minute it would resolve Twilight's rambling criticism and maybe reach a broader audience, but I like it as is and didn't hear it that way.

 

[cream123]

Re: New tune

Nice tone and textures. A bit rambling, however, in my opinion.

thanks for the feedback. Now that I come back to it, I would tend to agree with you. I'll implement Amir's advice I thinks. I was toying with the idea of adding another section but I like the simplicity...I think I'll just shorten it.

I really enjoyed this. Your playing and tone are excellent. It has a great moodiness to it and I love the return you use on the lead part. My first impression was that it was somber, simple, and beautiful. I think if you shortened it by 30s-1 minute it would resolve Twilight's rambling criticism and maybe reach a broader audience, but I like it as is and didn't hear it that way.

hey thanks. this was with the silvertone and my partsd together duo sonic. I picked up an SM57 so I get to use a micd amp for the first time!

 

[greekdude]

Re: New tune

Tone is fantastic. Your arrangement/orchestration is super cool.