Please any critics about my song!!!! HERE

[felipe_alonso_ruiz]

Hi im 17, im a guitarist/composer, and i have just finished recording a demo, ive just uploaded 1 song on soundclick, ¨Love & Hate¨. I would apreciate if u could listen and write any comments. I love all kinds of music btw.

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=2848427&q=lo

 

[Bad Fish]

Re: Please any critics about my song!!!! HERE

I like it. The lead guitar was well written, had a nice tone and felt pretty well played too. Not sure the title ''Love + Hate'' works for the song, but thats just my opinion. Had a good groove to it for a demo though, it has potential.

 

[felipe_alonso_ruiz]

Re: Please any critics about my song!!!! HERE

Thank u very much for listening, i appreciate it a lot!! theres anotehr song there, just in case. Peace!!!!!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=403219

 

[tfb1990]

Re: Please any critics about my song!!!! HERE

wow theres definately a little rock mixed in.. graet lead parts! im not a jazz fan so i just skipped over it lol but great lead

 

[felipe_alonso_ruiz]

Re: Please any critics about my song!!!! HERE

thanks for listenin, IT IS NOT JAZZ, i have been influenced, im a rocker till i die, and there are chops cause i was into that, so i didnt know what genre to click, just in case u think its jazz ITS NOT

 

[HamerPlyr]

Re: Please any critics about my song!!!! HERE

Honestly, it was repetitive. The solo could change it, but I think that you need to attack it with more passion. The groove is really cool, but the solo work could stand to be more varied.

I mean no offense, I'm trying to give you honest feedback so that you can adjust if you think that you need to change anything. Just my opinion, nothing more.