Remixed Song of Mine.

[flank]

posted this a little while back, but i've changed a few minor things with it. wanted to know what you guys think of it. its a song off an album i'm making. Not much in the way of cool guitar stuff for you 6-string fanatics, its meant to be more of a chilled out tune, laid back sort of thing.

i played everything, here goes:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=132715&songID=6153409

 

[flank]

Re: Remixed Song of Mine.

by the way, the guitar that is in there is just my Telecaster into my Twin Reverb, probably neck pickup.

 

[flank]

Re: Remixed Song of Mine.

do i need to add a guitar solo before i'll get a response? :alcoholic

haha.

 

[flank]

Re: Remixed Song of Mine.

bump, any comments? i'd like some even if you think it sucks.

 

[GoldenVulture]

Re: Remixed Song of Mine.

Your almost subliminal level vocal ,buried in delay is a bit much[unless your taking some sort of drug maybe!]and it needs something to vary it.It,s too repetitive.:kabong:

 

[flank]

Re: Remixed Song of Mine.

Your almost subliminal level vocal ,buried in delay is a bit much[unless your taking some sort of drug maybe!]and it needs something to vary it.It,s too repetitive.:kabong:

thanks for the reply. yea, the song is supposed to be almost trance-like in its effect, with a little more emphasis on repetition than diversity. The vocals aren't supposed to be clear or precise, so maybe that came through how i wanted it? I could pull the vocal level up a bit, but the delay will still remain.

Thanks for the thoughts, and I do see how it could be monotonous to some. Definately not a song for everybody.

 

[GoldenVulture]

Re: Remixed Song of Mine.

Vocals just need to be a bit louder;it,s too hard to make out what your saying/singing;and why have them there if you don,t want us to make out what they are!
You still need to vary it a bit more,even if it,s just a little here and there.